I didn't think this was "really bad," and I hope you did well on your midterm.

I enjoyed reading these moments in Lily's POV, and I think you handled it well.

Good job :)

That was so sad but great to read! Loved it!

Oooh... this one's good, too... I'd like to see more of YOUR version of things, though. We all know who Lily is... maybe you could expand on that? I've made her evil once... *giggles* I'm not suggesting that, but it would be a cool twist if you got to see into Lily's mind in a way JK Rowling never let you... Maybe more like your unnamed couple story, the one you just wrote... I mean, whoever that couple was, we had no clue they were in love. Anyway, it's cool! Keep on writing! *grins* *love and paperclips* Tessa P.S. Everybody else thinks it's Draco and Hermione or something! *pouts* I feel left out! When I read the word "students," though, I kinda switched to teacher-view... and then how they're a man and a woman? It could be anyone, though... Pleeeeeeeeeease tell me if I'm right? *pleading look* LOL

Okay - bree person or whoever you are, I'd just like to state that I had never read Borgin's "A Mother's Love" before I wrote this; I've only just read it now after reading your review. And for whoever doesn't believe me, that's okay because I know I'm telling the truth - so there! Oh, and there are at least two other stories on ff.n (aside from mine and Borgin's) with the same title.

there's a poem by borgin called a mothers love! It wuz published a month before yours! Copyer!

ouch. i've read alot of these kinds of fics, urs is pretty much in the top 10!

Wow! This is great!

Very good! Well written and descriptive.

I mean it to JEN! lol Iknow ur'll be a great

writer someday.

I like it!

Great Story

I love the way people write Lily's thoughts as she realizes James is dead, eveyone has such different ideas! Good story!:}

Wow, incredible!

*Me, trying to hold back a breaking sigh* Oh...Beautiful!

**Bursts into tears** Oh...my...lord. That was brilliant. Absoluety wonderful. But sad, touching and well written as well. That was sooooo terrific, it's in my faves, and I wish there was a list for absolute faves, because if there were, this fic would be in it. Loved it! Well done. * Rachie.V.

I almost cried. Wonderful, though too short.