yoshimiwolfspaw 2004-12-12 . chapter 1Wow. That was sad. I like it though, the ending was great. It started off with her not saying it and progressed to not wanting to and then ended with her finally saying it great job. |
little lady of fire 2004-12-05 . chapter 1i will burn it because i still don't like the fact the sirius is dead. i want him to come back. please Sirius come back. We need padfoot. The only true marauder left is rems. peter is a ratfinct. he is not a marauder. james and sirius are dead. poor moony. wormtail, prongs, and padfoot are gone |
bk11 2004-05-30 . chapter 1Very poignant. The last line says it pretty well, I think. I like that you ended with that. Good job! |
Briana Rose 2004-05-22 . chapter 1I really loved this, especially Ginny's cynicism. That was really great. *Sigh* Poor Sirius.
Happy writing!
Bri |
AJRoald 2004-05-16 . chapter 1You've captured Ginny very well, and it is a belivable story (although not sure Ginny would be in the hospital and not taken back to Hogwarts to let Poppy tend the ankle). "things you can't explain are simply humorous in some sick, twisted way" ~ This line sticks out to me. Very good description and oh so true. Over all, I like it! |
JamieBell 2004-05-15 . chapter 1Lol! Sad and funny at the same time! As for Ginny's toilet humour, hey, I've got brothers too, don't have a choice. Great job, and the teensy-weensy crush on Sirius is great, not full-blown, but you know, I would too! Great job!
Always,
Me
PS. How *do* you get that golden separating line? I wouldn't mind using it in my stories, would make life easier. |
jessica 2004-05-15 . chapter 1 I LOVED IT! WOW! Really, it's superb! |
Aimee Damita 2004-05-15 . chapter 1*starts to freak out* But... But he's not dead! I know he's not! He just... disappeared! Yeah! Remember? Luna said something about he's not dead and the voices on the other side of the veil. They just haven't realized it yet *nods*. Other than that, it was pretty good. It all makes sense on Ginny's part. |
Roaming Pony 2004-05-15 . chapter 1Hmrgh? Well, i did try to throw it across the room into the fireplace, but my laptop got stuck in the grate, so...
no, really, i'm not quite sure how i feel about this one- it's funny and yet...not? i likes Ginny though- and i feel you've done a decent job of portraying her emotions- so
i'll say...good work. Yes. |
Crystal-Gaze 2004-05-15 . chapter 1Good job! That seems like Ginny Weasley to me. Nice work! |