Amazing story! I really hope you plan to continue this and not end it here... it has alot of potential!

I liked it, but I'm just a [pathetic Sara/Grissom fan. :P Your writing had a good flow.

Nice fic. I'm really curious about Karen. I can see Sara losing it since she did go after Scott Shelton in Sex, Lies, and Larvae.

This was a very interesting read. Your writing was really clean, and the story flowed nicely. I liked the understated resolution at the end. Great job.

Wow. Could these characters be any more out of character?