zZorble 2008-08-09 . chapter 3 I can't help but notice that as I read this, it feels like I'm moving my eyes against the current. You seriously need to work on your grammar.
That's all.
*Ow* |
ZeroKnoble 2008-03-10 . chapter 5From beginning to end, I loved the entire thing...I wish you would continue the story in a sequel or something..*sigh*...good job. |
Louise Burge 2008-02-16 . chapter 5 This is the most beautiful Banjo Kazooie story I've ever read. Nice work. Are you gonna write more? |
AquaFlameElementalist 2008-01-04 . chapter 4Okay, I'll just say this: Really well-written. I could almost relate to Kazooie/Amy. Wish it would go on, though. I considered not reading this, but I am so glad I did! :D
I wish it was longer, though. |
MarioDS01 2007-11-26 . chapter 5That was a pretty sweet story there. I wished it went on. But at least I know Kazooie is happy with her new form with Banjo. I actually was thinking of doing a story like this. Maybe I still can somehow.
I hope to see more good stuff from you, maybe another romantic story... |
brokenpassions 2007-02-23 . chapter 5omg your story is just, WHOA, to think I use to like banjo(I was little ok) but you made him sound so kiky, XP I thinkis more if so that be great |
Kalana Fox 2006-08-15 . chapter 5Aw, how adorable! Very nicely written, I loved that video game, XD. |
Rock Raider 2005-05-04 . chapter 5Woah. Banjo & Kazooie just made love. I suppose Bottles will comment on that by saying "So, Banjo, how was Kazooie last night? We heard you & her moaning all night.". Anyways, update soon please. |
MikariStar 2005-01-08 . chapter 5I'm glad to see you've updated! An interesting plot twist but it's good that certain things where finally said or rather expressed in actions. XD |
Chris293 2004-12-19 . chapter 5 Hey Sahara! Some reason I can't access my account..I thought it must've ben deactivated by the staff but I checked my profile and i's still there! ohwell. I love this fic! ^-^ it's so precious! Keep up with the good work ol' buddy! |
Crocgirl13 2004-12-18 . chapter 5 Aw, that was really cute! Update soon!! |
Lyra the millenium holder1 2004-12-12 . chapter 3Aw why did you take out the replying to reviews section? it made it easier to see what your reactions to reviews were. Anyway Chapter 4 is still my favorite chaper ^-^ actualy, both chapter 4 & 5. You do realise that this B-K story has the most reviews in the whole section. just remember Sahara, I'm your #1 Fan! :D |
Casey 2004-12-11 . chapter 4 I've never read anything like this before..
This has got to be the Queen of all Banjo-Kazooie Romance stories. Chapter 5 where they kissed was the best part in the chapter my opinion, the rest of ht chapter was wonderfully done aswell, the rest of the chapters were done with unique and passionate words, the story gave me clear pictures in my mind. You are obviously the most greatest author here in my opinion, I love this story so much. I praise you for all your hard work! |
The Atomic Bull Terrier 2004-12-10 . chapter 5Wow... that was amazing...
I mean, the way you described the final scene was very vivid and you captured the essence of love easily here. I too have no problem with these types of stories, so continue soon. I'd love to see what's going to happen next. |
Nintendo Nut1 2004-12-10 . chapter 5Whoa... oh dang... Little lovin' there, huh?
Oh, well. I won't be immature about it, as I myself have done this type of scene before in one of my Zelda fics. Unlike most people, I accept semi-sexual scenes that are made to look beautiful and lovely. (hey, I read Elfquest. That should be enough). So, beautifully done on your part. Keep going!
~Nintendo Nut1 |