  Chow9 2004-07-28 . chapter 1Very interesting... |
| hypnotizeminds666 (didn't feel like logging in) 2004-07-22 . chapter 3 lmao, conker's twin brother? This is getting better and better! |
| hypnotizeminds666 (didn't feel like logging in) 2004-07-22 . chapter 2 GOOD JOB! Sonic should just rape Amy, so she can leave him alone...jk lol |
| hypnotizeminds666 (didn't feel like logging in) 2004-07-22 . chapter 1 Nice battle discription, and the plot is good, so far... |
| Stewierulz 2004-07-21 . chapter 4 who gives a ** what the other ** say?
it was good. You should not give up just because some bastard said you should give up before you get more flames...BLAH BLAH BLAH.
you should continue writting. |
| Ron Bungerdy 2004-07-12 . chapter 4 Good story, just do EVERYONE a favor? TONE DOWN THE LANGUAGE!Thank you :p |
| DedrickTheHitman 2004-07-05 . chapter 4 Not bad alucard, but i think you need to make the chapters a bit longer. Oh and on a another note don't bother reading anything from yaminy-grint4eva. Lets just say its a good thing you don't know her. |
| The Chaos Twins Shada and Shade 2004-06-11 . chapter 4 I unlocked all smashers all but mr.game and watch wat he look like?? is he 2-d? is he a robot? douse he go beep beep beep? |
| Blue Dragon 2004-06-04 . chapter 3 HAW HAW HAW HAW...that was gay! |
| Mecha-Bowser (Flame Master-in-training) 2004-06-04 . chapter 4 Hmm...what can i say about this?
Oh yea, It's a piece of ** i mean there is no plot nad their language is too vulgar! Now my suggestion is to make an INTERESTING plot and start over again. |
| TRIGGER MIKE THE GREAT 2004-05-24 . chapter 4 hm...what I should say about this? well it was very interesting (in a weird way) I want to see more chapters with more details! AND YOU BETTER DO IT OR ELSE *takes out a AK-47* |
| Tails must die... 2004-05-18 . chapter 2 This is pretty weird so far your gonna have to make like a intro or something for me to understand this story! (this is a semi-flame btw) and one the other things is even tho i hate miles he wouldnt cuss like that...neither would Sonic...but like i said earlier i dont understand and i think you need to make a intro. and one more thing whats this whole thing about if someone wins him or her and a partner? WTF? i thought this was a free-for-all? see this proves why you need to make a intro a.k.a. PROLOUGE |
| Psymon Stark's Brother (Flame Master) 2004-05-18 . chapter 1 DUDE WHAT THE ** IS THIS **? I MEAN C'MON WHATS THE WHOLE POINT? I MEAN DO YOU EVEN KNOW WHAT HALF THE CHARACTERS WANT? AND YOU GRAMMAR IS SO ** POOR, I ARGEE WITH BAD MOFO, YOU SUCK BALLS AT WRITING! JUST GIVE UP B4 YOU GET MORE FLAMES! |
| Bad Mofo 2004-05-17 . chapter 3 Dude, u cant write for **! its the same first chapter as u used on ur first gayass storie. nnoe of this adds up and now u r trying to act cool by puting unecesary cuss words in, how fcuking old r u kid? becuz u might as well give this ** up since u cant do it good. |
| Kuniva 2004-05-16 . chapter 4 Good so far...except for chapter 4. It's way too short and it has no plot what so ever. But the other chapters are good! |
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