great! i luv it!

So cute! I liked that ending, so don't beat yourself up. Now, I feel stupid because this was published like four years ago, and if your are even reading this review, you're problably thinking "Wow, this girl is a little late" but just know that I liked it!

You're a fine fluff writer.

It bit him in the butt. Poor guy.

Sora is lying right and left. Hope it doesn't come back to bite him in the butt.

Dang! I missed them almost kissing, all because the stupid page wouldn't come up! Gosh! What math is your sister taking? This is so cute!

um...chapter three has disapeared...I'm going to just keep reading anyway...strangest thing. It just won't come up.

heeheehee attack of the random Disney names. This is cool! I like!

Yay! Sora is a nerd! Go nerds! lol

This chapter isn't showing up on the screen!! NO! It was getting good too.

No, i rly liked this story. You know, i thought it was pretty retarted when i first read the summary, so i was bored one night and i decided to read it. i LuVeD iT!. You gave me the lesson to 'not judge a book by its cover' i guess. Anyway. i didn't get it on chappie 3. Y didn't you wright anything?! LOVED THA STORY!

:]-Jilly:D!

lol theres no chapter 3 o_O what happened?

not as bad as you may think, personaly i would have gone with a meating later in life sort of thing...
after yers of seperation they meet and find that a little piece of frute can do wonderous things. :)

keep it going,
in the last ch. you used the loved instead of loves. the word loved is past tense so it's like sora stoped loveing kariri.

it was a little to simple to figure out...