I really like your dialogue and characterizations. Awesome.
-- Super Lizard

Please do a sequel because I want to know what this 'gift' in Carl is. Great story.

You have got to put up the last chapter(s) because I want to know what the gift is. Carl is a great character and i'm glad that the dark priest won't hurt him again.

Whats happened to the chapters!? its been months and you haven't updated!! you have got to write somthing soon cus this is just to good a story to let die out and i wanna know what special power carl has lol
lots of love
Kimmy B

im loving this so much. when is your next chapter gonna be put up cus i wanna know what goes one
lots of love
kimmyb

Lovely ending (albeit with suitably disturbing ideas), the scenes between Carl and Van Helsing are truly moving.

Glad to hear there's going to be a sequel :-)

I must say that this is one of the best Van Helsing fan fics I've read. It was exciting, scary and dare I say it? even a little naughty. I look forward to reading more stories of you:)

=D this is too cool! *smiles so big face cracks in 2) LoL

Is it over or is there more... cuz there better be more... this story RULES!..

ARGH! Are you kidding me?! SO NOT THE END! GR!

You had me scared to pieces there, you! This is so not the end, there's got to be some sort of expounding on what that 'gift' is...

Luv, Peace, Wenham and Boyd,
~Lady Tavington

Wow! Incredible ending, to an incredible story. Left me so curious though! Very good cliff-hanger-ish ending, and I can not wait for the sequal!

it's finished? *sniff*

great ending! excellent! perfection!

SEQUEL!

i can't wait for you to post it. i wanna know about this gift/curse thing. hm...

keep up the great writing! i look forward to the sequel!

Very nicely done, read the whole thing straight through. Thank you for giving us the non-slash version, and posting the other elsewhere...you told us enough here so we got the point without too much for a non-slash person such as myself. Looking forward to the sequel, this was good! ~HR

Excellent story, very well told. Everyone was in character and it was exciting!

First off, your story is one of the only good VanHelsing fics I've been able to find in the sludge that can often drown FFnet. Secondly, it is the only one of this select few which is decently long (I read rather fast). And thus, I must commend you for your speed and your quality, but also for your versitility. I have already sent an email in my curiousity concerning the less PG version of your story, but I have no doubt that it is of the same excellent quality as this version. Please continue to write this and other wonderful works in this fandom, as it is one ripe with potential...and Hugh Jackman being sessy. ^_^ Now, having gotten my one fangirlsquee out of the way, seriously...great stuff and keep up with it. Lovely lovely lovely.