that was a really great fanfiction you should keep going with it. I loved it so two thumbs up!

LOL, hehe this is great. I can't wait to see more. The spelling and grammer is really good. I see nothing to complain about except that you left me hanging and wanting more. I can't see what happends next.
I have never seen Dog Day Afternoon, I hope that won't make me unable to understand this. I hope to see Hermione/Draco action within the first ten chapters! Yay! Do you have any other stories? You know what I'll check myself, that way I can read them right away if you do. Good job! Please Update at the soonest convenience!

i'm sorry to tell u but this story is completely ooc !! there is no way herms will rub a bank! i'm sorry i ever read that!