wow excellent story i enjoyed reading it.

absolutely loved ur story!!

I absoluely loved it. Of course they weren't like the Serena and Darien we all know from the anime and manga, but it was still great! The whole 'kissing sucks' deal was just very well done, and how they only found it great with eachother was the best. Oh and the whole deal with Darien and unhappiness was very well done. I totally believed that he could be like that. Like if we analyzed the anime or manga that this would happen in between what we don't see. I mean we all know that Rini/Chibi Usa came into the world some how. LOL! Again this was great. I'm not sure if this was suppose to be the ending or not, but if it is it works good. You know..it's a good way to end it. So thanks for writing this. I enjoyed it eminsly(sp?).=)

I liked this where it ends. Some grammatical errors and typos, but I'll die of shock the day I read a fan fic completely devoid of those.

Great work. This was a real joy to read.

The format of the story takes away attention from the actual story.

OMG! I love Andrew's character! he always says the right at the right time. I loved the story, funny and cute at the same time. Awesome job!
^_^

bahahahahaahahaha thats effing hilarious who does that?
lol

i love it please finish. ;)

very good story i loved it. so your making an epilogue cant wait for that to come out. lol

Moonfan2012

GREAT STORY! They'll be together forever.

please come back i need more but i would have liked if Andrew went into brother mode and was going to yell or throttle Darien. i like when Andrew goes all protective of Serena. Please comeback and add more soon.

This is a fantastic story. I hope you find the time to write an epilogue.

I loved this story. It was a breath of fresh air. Not to angsty and very humorous.

Brilliant! Honestly the best Sailor Moon fic i have read so far. You were realistic. You were just explicit enough without being a little too detailed on the sex scenes. It also had just the right dose of humor and deep emotional views. All in all absoloutley perfect! I would love to see more stuff from you.

THIS STORY WAS S0 AWESOME! I LOVED IT!