I read this because of the title, and I am quite impressed with your name choices. A kindred soul, you might say.
This was a very good story, adn yeah, you have a few mis-words. I don't have a beta-reader either, adn I know the feeling!
The story was quite exciting, and I am imprssed with the maturity that you gave Jack in the end. It is a twisted irony indeed.
I think I liked the tavern scene the best, because you were able to be serious and humorous at the same time.
One suggestion, thoough. I think that you should have broke this up into different entries. It is awfully hard to sit here at one sitting and read this at once, especially with all the chaos going on around me!

Hmm. This was an interesting fic; but i think it's a little disjointed, or something...if Will was going to be crazy, he should have stayed that way, cuz i really don't think you could do all the stuff he did and then decide to be friends again...and i don't think Jack would have been too eager to team up again either? I dunno. i liked it, for what it was, though. where'd the title come from? cuz i read Medea, and i don't see it yet...well, if you add more, i wanna know.