 Cracked Coconut 2009-05-03 . chapter 14i love your story!! but why have you stopped? what happened? pleasecome back! |
 pheobep3 2008-05-24 . chapter 14please update |
 urbendragon 2007-12-01 . chapter 14please continue |
 Insane Dragoness 2006-04-18 . chapter 14NO UPDATES SINCE 09/19/05?!
HOW COULD YOU!
Please update this soon!
I love where this story is going. ^_^ |
 cursedgirl 2006-02-19 . chapter 14very good! whana reade more about it.. =) so please hurry up! |
 Ailias Kurai 2005-10-17 . chapter 14Dun dun du! Dramatic! She tough, gr! Hehe, keep going! |
 Fortune Zyne 2005-09-20 . chapter 14She'll die! I hope she does!
I'm a Catholic, and I hope she dies! |
 Remember 2005-09-20 . chapter 14DUN, DUN, DUN... Damn you! I hate cliffies! And to think I make them myself... Fine! I hate it when OTHER people make cliffies. That's right. But I forgive you. I want her to live and I want that damned Van Helsing dead and soon! I can't stand his face in my head as I read this. I only want Dracula's face. That it. :) Awesome, and I mean... awesome chapter (bold, italicize, and underline the word "awesome"). It was superb, full of action and suspense! I loved it! BRAVO!! |
 Elwyndra 2005-09-20 . chapter 14AH! lol NEED MORE!! Continue please! please please! :D lol |
 Skyler McAndrews 2005-09-19 . chapter 13Oh YAY! THANK YOU! Another chapter, I was so excited to find it waiting for me. Trust Van Helsing to mistrust poor innocent little Arianna. Of course, she is Dracula's daughter so...
Keep up the good work, and I can't wait to read more!
~SM |
 Elwyndra 2005-09-11 . chapter 13Wow, brilliant! Please continue! :D |
 punk rock prinsses 2005-09-10 . chapter 13very nice although i would have liked it to be a bit more longer but above all its good |
 Remember 2005-09-07 . chapter 13hey pax.
This is Remember. I've actually been reading your story for a while now, I just never got around to reviewing. Sorry. i'll make it up to you right now. Your story is exquisite in every sense of the word. Its original and has a great story line. I love your O.C. Adriana (that's how you spell it right?) She's awesome! This story is absolutley amazing, i don't know why i didn't review sooner. absolutley breathtaking and I would know what that is. You are now on my favorite everything list, so kudos for you. Awesome job though with this chapter. I think I know who this strange girl is... well, then again, who doesn't? I'm becoming addicted to your story, so please, update soon.
-Remember |
 Eldridor 2005-09-07 . chapter 13PLease update again soon i like this story alot!! |
 Eldridor 2005-09-07 . chapter 10Whats gonna happen to him?? |