I want the end to be a bloody explosion, please. Something nuclear, like Omega man, and I will be the only survivor, except for the mutants, but a nice beretta nine will take care of them.

Sorry, that's my fantasy, not yours.

Huh? Is this biblical, or just your own idea? No offense, but I've been reading a LOT about the end, and that doesn't quite sound like it. Look at the website w w w . r a p t u r e r e a d y . c o m for more details (sorry I had to write the website like that).

I'm not an expert at poetry, but I can say you have interesting themes in your writing.

Wow. You have such an amazing talent. AGAIN, I will say-I LOVE LOVE LOVE the way you write. It's absolutely beautiful. But, to be honest- I don't know what to think of "As the creator is soon to be no more". But, this was amazing.

o I like a lot. Very very good, hats off to ya

dude! this was great.

Intresting, very intresting. I'm not sure what it is about the poem that I like, maybe its everything about it. But I like it, keep it up =]

SV~ out.

Wow...To bring the children of light and darkness together...such an ambitous task, but anything is possible. Good work, and keep it up. ;)