That was really, really good! What a twist on Cloud's time spent in Mideel. I loved the way you developed the charecters of Dr. Sands and Nurse Clover. I really enjoyed this fic!

omg this story was so good! I love stories that take an small event in a work and expand on it, definitelty my favorite type of fanfiction! this was great! Using the doctor's perspective and switching his role from "good doc" to "evil scientist" was very fresh and unexpected. oh man! you need to write more of these! heh good job!