luv it
luv it
luv it

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I LOVE YOU. This = WIN. It was so swet! I almost died~ homg lovely writing!

wow...dark...

i figured toji died, or at least he'd be a bit more happy about it...

but eh.

This is an absolutely wonderful story. I've only just started watching Evangelion, and I'm already a huge fan of this shipping. You portrayed them beautifully. Please keep up your great work!

in a word, beautiful.

YAY! I totally fell in LOVE with Touji and Hikari! They are just so stinkin cute together! I just got done with the book where she makes him the lunch...so sad...I like this better *hugs self* very nice!

ah, nice and angsty! is toji really like that i wonder?

Cute! =^_^= This is going on my favorites list!

Wow. I'm glad to have found yet another author who's a H/T shipper. I must say this was well written. This has to be the only Hikari/Touji fic so far that almost made me cry. It was utterly sweet. Write on~! btw thanks for reviewing my fic "Adam" (otherwise I wouldn't have discovered this good fic of yours) ;]

Euph.

I"M A *HUGE* FAN OF THIS COUPLE! I'm so glad you wrote sucha nice sweet fic bout em@ (yes its a bit bitter sweet.poor injured touji!)

Oh my gosh, I so hate you. That was so good you actually made me cry. I laughed when Touji died, I laughed! and then that made me cry. I have to give you props chi-chi, especially if you can make me cry like that. I actually enjoyed it very much. See ya tommorrow!

Oh man, that was such a beautiful and moving story. I really enjoyed reading it.

GOD, I WAS IN TEARS WHEN I READ THIE EXTREMELY BEAUTIFUL FIC! THIS WAS REALLY WELL DONE, SO SAD, AND EMOTIONAL MOST OF THE TIME. TOUJI/HIKARI FICS ARE THE BEST EVER AND THIS IS ONE OF THEM!
Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please...(takes deep breath) make another chapter to this story. It would make me really happy if you do! And when that happens, I'll may put you on my favorits lists!
Great job!

WOW
Really great chapter are you going to update or is it going to be a one shot. It is extremely well written, few grammer errors, and somewhat unique. Keep up the good work

OOC, that is how I would describe Touji here. Now I also say that because in the series we don't have a chance of seeing him more deeply than shown as a tough-guy, stubborn, proud, emotions-driven. Heck, seeing him in despair in the hospital reminded me of Shinji, with the "slight" difference that Shinji didn't really knew if he loved somebody. But I'm getting off-topic... I liked it, me thinks there is serious potential here... hell, I'd like to know how he'll react when he discovers about how things happened as well as what happened to Shinji...
I almost forgot, in the series the 14th attacked soon after the 13th/Unit-03, yet there isn't any signs here that Touji was awake/aware of it. Just wondering if the 14th was delayed ;)...