Heh, now it's Ron who's "jealing".

"'Air's been known tah make some bad choices . . . I t'ink dat dis may be one of 'em.'"

My favorite line in the chapter. It just sums it up so perfectly.

"Junior year is the most important year of high school" everyone says. I’m really starting to freak out about my mid semester grades, which are due this week.

I'd write more but it's late and I've still got homework.

Love ya!

And the confusion begins! Damn girl it's been two years since you've updated! It's pure torture waiting to see what's going to happen next. Anyway I'm so happy you've finally updated AND I've got one whole chapter to read.

I'm really enjoying this. It's great. Any chance for some romance between Jack and Kim? Keep up the good work.

Whoa! I'm LOVING IT. And sorry for not reviewing the other chapters. I did read them!

And Tag and Ron need to get cracking, okay? Muahaha.

GASP! OH NO! WHAT WILL HAPPEN?!?! THE SUSPENSE! ... i was in this chapter a lot! ^_^ yay for updating! i hope you update again soon!

O I am soo evil! Hehehe bad me! I LOVE IT! I read it as soon as you updated but it wouldnt let me review! AH *tackles you* IT SO ROCKS! ITS AWESOME I LOVE IT! You get everyones personalties so well! Great job! Now hurry up and update again! Please! Or else dun dun dun Muahahahahah *holds up the keys to her writers closet where she sticks people who dont update fast enough*

*GASP* oh no! what's going to happen! EP! *begs for another update* haha, i loved the line "Oh you are so jealing." It made me laugh outloud XD

If you update soon on this, I'll try to update 'Newsie Bride' and 'Finding Tree'. :-D

Hi again. Yay, Race was in it! Anyways, I just joined the NML- I'm Marty, but my e-mails come out as Lulu Ish (an alias I used for my advice column for the school newspaper last year... I'm not on the paper any more, though... so I use it for anything). So drop me a line! And update soon!

WHY CAN'T IT BE ME? I WANT TO BE IN 1899 WITH THE NEWSIES! Awesome story- I just got into Newsies 'cuz of my Drama Camp (we did a few scenes from it). Anyways, update soon! AND PUT MORE OF RACETRACK IN IT (he's my fave newsie).

This is awesome! So amusing yet intiguing. Where would we be without the internet? IN THE PITS OF HELL WHERE THEY FEED YOU COOKED CARROTS!!

Spot: Oh gawd no! *shudders*

Yes, you need more sleep, or less caffiene. Can't wait for the next one!! SO HURRY UP!! *ducks the objects that are thrown at her* Please?

*GASPNESS* what WILL happen!??! Update soon, this is like the only fic I've read in like a month on !

AH AH AHH AH AH AH AH I love myself *grins* I am very bad bad me bad! I love how you protray the characters so wel! It rocks! The whole story rocks! I am soo proud you updated! Now do it again! Lol Sooner then soon! AH You gotta update I need to know what happens! I am dying here! Ah *calms down some* Ah!

awsome!

cool!more more!