it was so cute

that image of them, standing in the dark...perfection :)

it was kool please continue

Meghan,
Could your work be any better? It's me, Ashley! I wrote a review awhile back for "Sugar Water" and I thought this was just as good! Keep
up the good work!
Your biggest reading fan,
Ashley

Great just great its a realy good ficlet

I love this! It is so sweet! Marco and Dylan!

soo good i love it !
more more more
charles

That was really sweet! I loved it, even though it was a ficlet.

This is the cutest thing ever! You must write more! About anything MarcoDylan! Awesome!

Aw,that was cute i hope you write more it was sweet and to the point if you have any other stories drop me an email pwez!^.^

Hey that is really good.Really it is!...Well keep up the good work.
punk-anjewl

Make it a real story!

That was way too sweet! I mean, that in a good way, too. Like chocolate and sugar and strawberries - the whole thing!
It makes me wish my first kiss would be as perfect as that.
You're a fantastic writer!

Um...ok.
It's short, sweet, and to the point.

Very cute. :)