huh, I thought Homura is the male advisor (more so because of the name. Koharu sounds like a girl name)

Does this mean that Ranma is going to be tempted with power from someone? Or is it that he will be betrayed by someone close to him? Or maybe he becomes corrupted through some subtle nudges?

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Good story you should keep going. I am glad you didn't get rid of Ranma's humanity.

An update someday would not go amiss...

I hearby rename this fic "Ranma becomes a wimp!"

this is truelly pathetic.

a) you've reduced his strength, speed and amount he normally trains (everything can be training!) from that show in cannon by a rediculous amount.

b) he's sharing his techniques left and right to such a degree he has obviously abandoned all his honor (family schools are CLOSED! they do not share their techniques to those outside it).

c) I seriously doubt that he would suddenly decide to become a ninja at the drop of a hat, even for new techniques. He's more likely to refuseto become one whilst picking up the techniques via observation and trial-and-error.

AND this is just a short list..

READ THE RANMA 1/2 MANGA

:-).

moar!! Oh man, I need more chapters. I wish you get his curse out already or at least get some romance in there and moar fight scenes hehe. moarr!! Thanks for the fic.

Good, but dead story

Good stuff.

Thanks for sharing.

Ranma should tell Konoha to go to hell. I also didn't like the conversation with Ranma and Sasuke during the retrieval part.

It seemed way too stiff and rather unlike Ranma.

i like it!

good chapter, byes

Well, this looks interesting... It'll be fun to see where this goes.

By the way though, there is something I just must bash a little.

"'forces me to say that he would be defeated by our own village Chuunins'" Excerpt from the fic.

What the hell is that crap!? Ranma being beaten by a CHUUNIN!?! BWAHAHAHAHA! You cannot be serious!? Ranma is strong enough to lift nearly, if not over, a ton of weight (this is shown in the manga when he lifts a chunk of ice about five-six times larger than he is - in his girl form which is weaker than his guy form), is so damn fast that he can punch several hundred times in a few seconds.
(Katchu Tenshin Amaguriken training)

The Mouko Takabisha, the Umi-Sen-Ken and most probably the Yama-Sen-Ken.
(since there is no way in hell he would allow Genma to hide that style from him - he also used a Vacuum Blade against Saffron in this fic, which is the Kijin Raishuu Dan move of the Yama-Sen-Ken)

And finally, the Hiryu Shoten Ha, all the revisions based on it and the Soul of Ice.

Some JOUNIN are not as strong, fast and durable as he is! And few possesses techniques that are so potentially lethal as the Kijin Raishuu Dan and the Hiryu Shoten Ha techniques.

Hrm. Aside from that, this fic is very good.

Keep up the good work.

Yup, I think i can't even read past here. Ranma fought and lost against everyone, and they complaining about him fighting to hard. So why set him up to loose, if they didn't even want him to fight that well. Plus the rather obvious, no teacher status he's getting it won't be to long I hope before ranma ditches this lousy group.