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Reviews For: Trials and Tribulations
Chaotic Demon 2004-05-20 . chapter 2
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dory 2004-05-18 . chapter 1
ooh!
this is gonna be good!
I can tell!
Esi-Siriuslovesyou 2004-05-17 . chapter 1
HeyI lvoe your story! and yes that is the right spell...engorgio...i think if you made amelia you should do it for peter or something because sirius and remus need women there age and james has lily. peter is well, just peter...anywho i do love the story...if you ever have time you should check out my story that i just started today..its called "lily in the sky with diamonds" its not as good as yours of course but i want some people to check it out to see if there is anything i should do to it to make it better or what not...any who..can't wait for the next chapter! this is very well written.
Serenity 2004-05-16 . chapter 1
No please don't go into a lot of detail with Amelia. There's nothing wrong with just having a romance plot with Lily and James and not having one with an OC character. I think the story will be SO much better without a love interest with Amelia.
Seeke3 2004-05-16 . chapter 1
Hey love your writing style very descriptive you have alot of talent, i can't wait to find out what the prank is, it sounds like it's gonna be funny.
Christine 2004-05-15 . chapter 1
i already reviewed one of your stories tonight! i like this story a lot also! it sounds like its going to be really good! i think amelia and remus shoudl get together. they would make a cute couple i think. plz update this story soon! its really good -christine
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