So, you know I'm not well-versed in anything Mercedes Lackey, but I do love your fics. This one has some repetitive aspects, but they aren't horrid.

It reminds me of a scandinavian fairy tale- not any one in particular, there's just something about it that does. You could probably figure out what I'm thinking of before I can, of course.

Great fic. I feel sorry for Talia losing her sister and about Vrisa changing and becoming the 'perfect' Firstwife.

*sniffles* Poor Vrisa.. being married to father and then son.

Nicely done

Wow - that was depressing! but well written - i've always wondered about the answer to the same question, it's a little glossed over in the books.
anyway, don't know if you intend to write anymore of this story but i hope you do.
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Poor Vrisa! How could she have changed so much from who Talia knew? So sad :(. great job with the write!
~~Wind to thy wings, Breezefire~~

this is very good for your first song fic. great job and can't wait to see what else you come up with.

Very moving, very entertaining. I enjoyed it, you did a good job.

*cries* Extremely well-written. Very sad as well. I enjoyed.