What a wonderful story! It was action-packed, and the humor balanced out the tension very nicely. I particularly liked how you wrote it as a detective story. You dropped the clues for the connection very well. It was one of those stories where you're guessing (wrongly) the whole way through, until the end where everything clicks together so well that you wanna cry "Eureka!".

Well, maybe not Eureka... but there was a definite "Oh!" and maybe a bit of "...duh," accompanied by a sound head smack.

Really, the plot the well thought-out and the little clues were woven together excellently. Well done!

Aw. Another great fic, as usual. 29 candles, lol. Awesome plot, it was a but obvious what was going on in the beginning, but that's alright. A great read.