It would be awesome with a sequel. Fun to read two versions, though I prefer the first one, because of the ending, and the way they tell each other things. I can't think of any other way to describe it...

Very nice little scenario. I think I liked the first POV first... it seemed more subtle somehow.

your interpretation on their characters was awesome, and the two points of view really added to the story. :D :D :D

This is a nice little ficlet. Glad to see a fic of yours after such a long time. Please continue with the idea of expanding this plotline, I hope you'll find a good betareader.

ah,.. I like the second scene better. and please do continue this as a full-length story, it would be awesome!

hey :D great story I really liked seeing it from both points of view. If you still need a beta you can e-mail me. I'm on Perfect Imagination under the name cliodne.

Good story. Not the usual "Harry meets Ginny in the common room" fluff. I enjoyed it, though I'm not sure I could choose one I liked over the other.
I'm looking forward to reading the sequel to the Captive, which is one of my all time favorites. Have you looked into getting a beta at Phoenixsong.net? They've closed submissions for this month, but they should open them next month.

Wow. I love how you can delve so deeply into Harry's and Ginny's psyches in such a small piece. Your scenes and dialog are just as crisp and real as your analysis of the characters. As with all your work, I enjoyed this immensely.
Casca at w.thehiddentower.net was my first beta, and she sets a very high bar for betas. I have also had Jane and Elucreh at w.checkmated.com as betas, and my work there was greatly honed by their ministrations. I'd love to offer myself as a beta, just to see more of your work in development, if naught else, but I'm afraid that is beyond my writing skills.

Done very well though I can't really see Ginny confessing to harry like that but i suppose it's possible.