Sweet XD

I loved this story. I think it's perfect how it ends with her tears and a feeling of hopeplessness. You tore my heart. Thanks.

Sarcasm aside, I really do like it. It's well written, and I just loved the angst of the piece.

Your writing is exquisite. I quite like the use of opposites and imagery you used to create a startlingly beautiful portrait of humanity. I look forward to reading more of your writing. - oddly introspective

Nice way to convey Aurikku. It was well done.

That was simple yet intricate and beautiful while pretty. I really liked it. How bittersweet. More bitter than sweet but I guess life isn't filled with happy endings...

THAT'S HORRIBLE! SO SAD! IS THERE MORE? CAUSE THAT WAS... HORRIBLE! ;_;

Great one-shot! It was beautifully written, great images and you set the mood very well. I loved it!

^_^ That was so sweet - I'm almost crying.
Good job on this - have you written any other fanfics on Aurikku?

Sweet, i like it.
Your an Aurikku fan like me? cool!
if this is the standard of work that i've got to contend with then i'm done for!
tell you what, could you read my story? i know you'll like it if your an Aurikku fan, i don't need to tell you how to find it coz i can tell you know how to!
anyway, write more of this story, if you are going to? its really good! i like the idea of time standing still when you kiss, so sweet yet dirty, you have some fire in you, definitly talent!

Wow.
I'm a firm supporter of Aurikku, so I read all the ones I can find. Most are...highly pathetic. But this...well, wow. It was well written, with a good concept, and I really loved it. So I'm gonna favourite it. Hehe.

Hey, I like your story~~it's interesting too and very nice when you imagine the scene in motion too. A good story for any Aurikku readers too~=P
=)

not really in the personality of rikku, but beautifully written nonetheless :D for this story, you could pretty much imagine any character you want! no names were said, so yeah, its like..wow! awsome and beautifully written :D

oh yevon, that was good... real good. you portrayed the emotions very nicely.
i love this sentance: "A kiss is a moment in time when two people are one and apart, afraid and courageous, and balance each other more perfectly even than yin and yang."
and the end... ;_; gyah, it makes me sad...
i loved it!