little miss michelle 2008-01-08 . chapter 1I really like the story. are you going to do a part 2? |
googlibear 2007-12-15 . chapter 1Just looking back to read some completed HR/SB stuff and found this. I really enjoyed it. It was very sweet. |
monketprobs 2007-11-27 . chapter 1that was reslly beautiful! |
Hotflower 2007-03-17 . chapter 1It was pretty...
you know the kind of pretty where you can't touch it for fear of damaging it, but its so beautiful anyway |
BlackHalliwell 2006-09-07 . chapter 1awesome |
Sj 2005-11-27 . chapter 1 Nice i like it :)
You should keep writing it |
CH-Flo 2005-02-27 . chapter 1i love it! a sequel would be fantastic! |
The-Ever-Lazy-One 2005-01-11 . chapter 1That's so, so, so SWEET! It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. Completely wonderful.
On a completely different topic than your story, which, as I mentioned above, is wonderful, Can I please, please, please become a member of your C2 staff?
Back to the story, then, anyways. Good writing, good SHIP- obviously- and nice story. Write more like it. :) |
katemary77 2004-11-29 . chapter 1Ah... I love this story. So simple, yet so pretty. And now overdramatic monologues or pashes. Very nice. Less is best. I also am a huge fan of Herm/Sirius, although I haven't written any, and I know how you feel. Where are all the Her/Sir stories? If you haven't already, go check out Eulogizing Memoirs by Amelie Rae Lanhoss, it's a really good H/S. I really love the relationship you had with Herm and Drake and Har and Ron, how they were all protective of her. Made me go "Aw!" The background you gave to this story sounded SO interesting. I'd love to see something more on that. But no pushing. So thanks for the great read, can't wait to see more from you in the Herm/Sir department. |
Fanfic-Frankie 2004-09-22 . chapter 1Aw.
But you are OBSESSESD. But I have joined. Now I have to write something. GAH! |
heliopath 2004-06-22 . chapter 1 Thank God there's no timeturners in this one! I think SB/HG pairings are great, and you've managed to avoid the timeturner trap!This is really good, its got loadsa potential as long as you don't make H fall in love too quickly. I like the way its got a proper story line with the war and all and isn't just all romancey romancey. |
Live Fast Die Never 2004-06-21 . chapter 1really good I liked it. |
Chikin Wang 2004-05-24 . chapter 1Not trying to offend anyone or anything, but sirius is kinda dead, right? If you take this as an offense, you can sock me.
Anyway. Nice fic. It was kinda vague. I'm gonna go read the prequel now. |
someonelse 2004-05-19 . chapter 1It's good.. keep writing. :) |
Chica Chiflada (too lazy to sign in) 2004-05-18 . chapter 1 One word: CONTINUE! |