I wish she was here with me, then I wouldn't care

less if that mountain sprouted wings and pulled an eyelid down at me.

LOL XD

Wow Ryouga sounds pretty angry in some parts. Pretty well written

7.9/10

Please improve how you do your sentences, because this story needs a bit more plot. It has definatly emotion, but people these days want BIG name plots and kick-butt (Don't like the cuss .

Very kawaii. Ryoga is a wonderful character with a great personality, even if he is a bit too hung up on Akane. He's very depressed, unfortunetly, as many people in this world are. Hopefully he will find someone to bring him out of the darkness and into the light. Like Ucchan! ) Love this fic! Keep writing!

very neat poem. i find it most interesting, and very like ryouga...

Mind if I use this in my Mystery Anime Theatre 3000? No, I didn't think you did! HAHAHA!