Wow. I love how you portrayed Yui's irritability and Suboshi's blind devotion.

Love the fic!

This was a well done piece! I love this sweet scene, it shows the other side of Suboshi. The Seiryuu are a real misunderstood bunch. Nice neat!

I really like this one-shot glimpse at how Suboshi's love for Yui grows, and I especially enjoyed the way you describe the thoughts in his head without ever really 'thinking' them. With the dialogue, and your always amazing descriptions of things, I could see this interaction playing out as I read. You write in the first person very well. Good job! :)