  Em43 2007-12-08 . chapter 6aww that was so cute...i don't know what else to say but that it was cute, a little too short for my liking but that's only me so yea...keep going on with the stories.. |
| codelyokoluvagrl 2007-11-29 . chapter 6 i loved it even though it was short |
| me 2006-12-17 . chapter 6 IM BEGGING YOU WITH ALL OF MY HEART MIND AND SOUL UPDATE! |
| Sithking Zero 2006-01-07 . chapter 6 um... Great story and all, but you might want to change the status of the story to "Complete."
This was really good! I mean it. Though you probably could have elaborated on the diary-reading part a little. You know, draw it out. More fluff can be inserted into each chapter. |
| Green Animelover 2005-12-18 . chapter 6 cute |
| Knight of Death 2005-11-15 . chapter 1 im happy |
| Otritzi 2005-11-03 . chapter 6 Very nice...a little fluffy...but I'd rather liked have seen how the invulnerabliity program worked for Odd. |
| Erin 2004-10-16 . chapter 6 loved it! |
| noface1984 2004-09-08 . chapter 6 Guy one in my brain: "DUDE"; Guy two in my brain: "DUDE"; Guy one: "THAT WAS AWSOME"; Guy two: "No kidding." |
| cat girl!! 2004-09-05 . chapter 2 that was so good i so like the the part that part of orricks dream LOL! |
| Zeldagurli 2004-09-01 . chapter 6 Keep up the awesome work! Love the story^.^ |
| Kopago the Hybrid 2004-08-30 . chapter 6 I can't wait to read more. |
| ZAPADAROS777 2004-08-28 . chapter 6 Nice one, SouKao Dreamer. Except you've got to watch your language. But other than that, good job. Keep up the good work. |
| KagamiGirl14 2004-08-26 . chapter 6 I luv this story! Please keep writing it! (i luv almost every U/Y story but this one's great!) |
| Saiyan Angel 2004-08-25 . chapter 6 I liked it. Make a sequil [SP].
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