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Reviews For: The Dance

Virgrin
2007-12-19
ch 1,
abusem... I don't like Perry/Emily.. perry/ilse is my favourite pairing from the emily series.. because the whole thing is so complex... and so entertaining... plus perry doesnt match emily's artistic temperament imo.. he goes better with ilse in that sense..
i still enjoyed your story, even though I like the canon pairings better., it was still a nice addition to the emilyofnewmoon fanfiction world.
Cat's Magic
2007-06-27
ch 1,
abuseI like this story. I prefer Emily and Teddy together,
also they do end up together in the books,
but I like this story anyway. ^_^

To all the reviewers who objected (which was
probably around half of those who reviewed)
to the (possible) Emily/Perry pairing:

It IS actually valid at this point in the story,
especially if it is mostly just Perry who feels
that way. Perry DID have a crush on Emily for
several years; this was revealed in all three
of the books, various times and in various ways.
At this point in the story, most of the time Ilse
and Perry do not know yet that they are meant for
each other; and Emily and Teddy don't know quite
as much about being meant for each other yet as
they will later on; they know a little about that,
but not very much yet.

So, to all of you who pointed out that Emily and
Teddy are meant for each other, as are Ilse and
Perry: Yes, that is true. BUT: It is, actually,
ALSO in keeping with the author's original works
to write a story in which none of them know that
as yet, AND in which Perry has an obvious crush
on Emily. (L.M. Montgomery herself made it obvious
multiple times that Perry DID feel like that for
a while. The TV series also occasionally addressed
that issue, although more often it put the people
together who do end up together, probably as a way
of showing/predicting the future, especially since
the show was not going to continue that far into
the future.

To zenonkarr (don't know if you're still around
or not): Good job. ^_^ This is my favorite of
your stories that I've read so far! ^_^

Cat =^_^=
Caroline
2007-04-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseI like the idea and your writing, but Emily/Perry is not really my thing. Perry belongs with Ilse and Emily with Teddy. Period.
Andrea Christine
2005-03-12
ch 1,
abuseI enjoyed this story a lot
emily
2003-07-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseWhat? Why did you put Perry and Emily together. If you have read Emily Climbs and Emily's Quest, you would know that Emily and Teddy are for eachother, and perry and ilse. I don't mind the odd, weird pairing here or there, but I've seen way to much of this dumb pairing today. Perry and Emily. That's only in the T-v. SEries. And work on your grammer!
Asher Puffs
2002-12-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseit would have been better if emily smacked jason with her crutch.
Emmi and Lli
2002-09-14
ch 1,
abuseGreat story! You've got a couple of spelling/grammar issues to iron out, but you're style of writing is really entertaining. Good job!
marzoog
2002-08-17
ch 1,
abuseok, have you read Emily Climbs and Emily's Quest? Cause if you have you should know that EMily loves Teddy and even likes him better in the first book then Perry. Why do all you TV fans pair her with Perry? He belongs to Ilse.
Very good, i liked it alot.
anonymous
2001-12-29
ch 1, anon.
abusejust browsing when i found this story and i really liked it, although i've always been more "Teddy&Emily"
Suzy
2001-02-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh, I enjoyed this immensely. Love 'Emily'! Won't you please write more Emily stories (maybe a sequel to "Dance")?!!
wolvie_Jay
2001-01-31
ch 1, anon.
abusei really liked this one alot seeing as how my faverate character perry was actually in it and not just in the background somewhere i also think that emily and perry should some day end up together.
keep up the good work!!!!
zenonkarr
2001-01-26
ch 1,
abuse

2001-01-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseOooh, I liked it!! A lot of typos, many glitches in the writing style, etc...but with a rewrite it could be very, VERY good. So you're one of the Emily/Perry fans? ;) I never can decide: Emily/Teddy or Emily/Perry? ~pathetic look~ I loved that book. Catch ya later!
Jessica
2001-01-24
ch 1, anon.
abuseVery cute! Sequal, perhaps? =Þ
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