Oh this is EXCELLENT! Your character voices are SPOT on and I LOVE Luke's reaction! It's perfectly Luke and thoroughly adorable! Great job! :)

Aha awesome )

I love it D

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I love my one shots.

And I love my LL's. :]

You're writing techniques are really good, may I inform you before I type anything further.

No spelling mistakes, wish I had that ability. x.x

I missed the whole romance on how they got together, and I'm subtly informing that -if- you wrote another fanfic about -how- they got together, I would definitely read it. .

Just to... you know, let you know. .'

But I do love how you kept both Lorelai and Luke in their character. :D

I could totally picture Lorelai playing around with something serious like that. xD

And the "Hee" bit topped it off nicely, Very Lorelai-esque.

I approve of that. :D!

All in all, well done. -Thumbs up.- :]

that was great...it had me giggling the whole time!

not the best, but still pretty cute

Totally love this story! so sweet and cute! very well written and the way of "telling" Luke is soo Lorelai-like. Great job you've done here. Thank you!

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY. lorelai would probably do that too. ha ha ed it!

LMAO, Could Luke *be* more dense in this? LMAO, great job, I think you did well with the characterisation, only one thing I'm gonna argue with. I simply can't picture Lorelai giving up coffee. We even saw in her dream that she refused to drink anything except "real" coffee...

ok, so i usualy am an extremely tough person to please but this was actualy pretty good. pretty fitting of the characters too.

this is like more than a year old but i loved it and just felt like that should be told. so yup i loved it

i'm sorry that i am only reading this now. you did a great job

totally cant belive you have not seen that much gilmore girls lol, great fic!

i know you wrote it a while ago, but i have only just discovered it lol,

xx

cuteness! i wish that could really happen on the show. it would make me smile XD very BIG! very awesome story. keep writing more!

omg that was really good!

that was so cute, it was cute how she led him on the clues, that was good.