wow! great job! I nearly cried!! This was just so sweet... and sad! *tears* you did a great job on this!

hey thats awesome!... write more asap

OMG that's so sad! i'm in tears... that mazing that's one of my favourite movies

I'm crying... though that doesn't say much, since I cry at a lot of things, but this was really, really good. The transition from life to death was amazingly written. Good job.

That was so sweet!! I almost cried! Good job!!

I like the ending...it makes me sad though. I love A Walk To Remember even though it's sad at the end. Good job.

I really liked that. You described how she might have felt so well. It was easy to see the picture painted in my mind.. Jamie on the bed, the room and of course Landon.
Good job.

pretty good...

Awesome! It almost made me cry. I love the image of her mom. I know I'm looking forward to the day I go to heaven and wonder what it will be like. I like the way you describe how tired she is. It is very accurate when you compare it to the time whe went through chemo. Keep writing!

I thought it was good. Though I think that you should add more to the story about how Landon is doing on Earth. Maybe add a twist or two.