What a good story! I loved reading it. It was very exciting and had alot of twists and turns in it. I hope you do a sequel, that would be so cool. It could have Warren and Kayla getting together in it :-) Anyway a job well done!

Wonderful ending! It's good that Virginia and the others supported Kayla with her decision on turning down the throne.

Wow... great ending... that was VERY brave of Kayla! I LOVED this! I hope that you're planning a sequel... about their adventures in the 10th kingdom... I'd LOVE that! I LOVED this story! Great ending!

Excellent! Wonderful chapter! And you have a title for the story now!! Cool!

Aw... I'm so happy for Kayla! But I'm miserable--you killed Wendell again! Hurry and update!

Yay! I'm the first to review Chapter nine! (I think.) =-) You took my suggestion! Yay! I CAN NOT wait for Chapter 10! Chapter 9 was WONDERFUL... some comic relief... what are you planning now...? I love ALL your "The 10th Kingdom" fics, and out of all four, this is the best! Update soon!

This is WONDERFUL so far! I LOVE it! It is SO suspenceful! And the whole thing turning out that Christine wasn't the ONLY heir makes it better! That was interesting how Kayla and her mother was almost a replay of Christine and Virginia. I like how Snow White let Wendell come back! Your story is just JAM-PACKED with twists and turns! I hope you figure out a title. I have two suggestions; "Kayla," or "The Murder of King Wendell," something like that. =-) I hope that it turns out that Jasmine was lying about surrendering... that would be interesting! Update soon! I'm dying here! POST CHAPTER NINE!

Wow.. Jasmine is quite the queen, eh? She took losing gracefully. This was really an original idea, and I like how you put Snow White in it.

*giggles at the idea of Wendell having to be a servant* Kayla didn't seem too overwhelmed at the idea of her father coming back.

*giggles at the idea of Wendell having to be a servant* Kayla didn't seem too overwhelmed at the idea of her father coming back.

Sweet! So is Wendell really alive alive or just... I don't know... visiting? Brilliant scene, by the way.

Whoot! Go Wolf! And go Virginia's face powder!

*shivers* Goodness, it's so creepy how you brought the Evil Queen of the Mirror thing back in,.

Go Gregory! He's a fascinating character! *huggles Gregory* Such a nice guy, and he's actually doing to do something about the murder! Yay!

And more Warren/Kayla!

Wow... unhappy family life for Kayla! Jasmine is just... evil ** woman that I don't like.

I am enjoying the happier sparks between Warren and Kayla-the different attitudes of the various couples at the dance scene were just... great in contrast.