The plot moved way too fast and the ending was just bad. Please don't write fanfictions ever again.

Um... worst story i've ever read...

It was a good idea, but i think if you added a little more patience, made the chapters and the story longer and added more detail, it would have made a really good story!

I don't know how to say what I'm gonna say but... This fic was not good. And I'm not saying this just because I'm a Ginny/Oliver shipper (which I'm not - I'm rooting for Oliver and Katie Bell).

Wanna know why? The story moved way too fast, the writing was clumsy, the ending made no sense at all and came out of nowhere... Shall I continue?

You tried to be original, but you just sucked.
Sorry [for being honest].

oh my god that is so sad!! i loved it but i feel really sad now!

I thought the plot was kinda bland, and it moved WAY too quickly - it was just too brief and absolutely way underdeveloped.
try for a longer and more detailed plot that isnt so choppy, like ginny runs into oliver - invites him home - he leaves - she invites him back -harry marries her.
it was too... short.

haha! good one! end...didja hear that guys??...::sigh:: yup, she almost got me...::sits and waits for update::

aww that was so mean! very well written though, i enjoyed it...untill the end *sobs*

i don't like the ending!

Woah, your right, I never expected that. I really liked it. You did a wonderful job. I can't wait to read anything else that you put up. Keep up the good work and I'll be reviewing for you later!

Wow! That was interesting! Unexpected lol! What about poor Oliver? Good though a bit sad.

This is really good! Keep up the great work and Update soon!

This really good all of the chapters are.

Update!! I really wanna know what happens.

Oh, lomger chapters please forgot to add the last review lol!