Ahh! That was great. I love Freya x Amarant, and this was a nice little dose of the pairing. Loved your word choice. It's so concise and yet paints a good picture. I'd like to see more Freya x Amarant. Good job!

-Ducky

You have a way with dialogue; I couldn't help but smile and nod at the way Amarant has of finishing Freya's sentences. This seems to me to be a bit of an...odd pairing, but I honestly think that if it had been played out, it would have been much like this.

Cute ^.^

Wonderful. =)

Freya and Amarant finally admit that not everyone will be able to accept their relationship, no matter how much in love they might be. Despite all this though, they still stay together. Every relationship will have its obstacles, and I'm glad you showed it here. The dialogue was impeccable, and the feel has just enough drama to get to you. Never mind about how short it was, as they say "Quality, not quantity."

You just made me like this pairing even more!

Oh! Oh, how sweet! Yes, it was short, but it was a perfect sentiment. That's one of the best things I've read in a while, despite it's length. Perfect.

Me likey... me likey alot!

Amazingly concise and vivid, you told an amazing story of a relationship and its problems without beating the reader over the head. Now -that- is skill.

The end made me laugh for some reason. XD I, uh...have no idea who these people (rats??) are, though... ^^;;
I didn't see anyone really complaining about the length. And it was a cute story, so... *spmolg*

Hehehe.XD That was very cute. I've always loved these two together, they're sweet. And funny.
Write more of them...please? I'll be looking forward to it.XD
~Apple-chan
(Oh, and I have no problem with the length whatsoever. Honestly, I think you pulled it off well.^^)

Which was the male and which was the female? The Alexandrian or the Burmecian? Usually, Alexandrian soldiers are female.
Very short and sweet, although I do despise any fic that has serious romance between Amarant and Freya, especially if it overlooks Fratley. Though I might just let you get away with it.
I look forward to seeing any longer entries from you in the FF9 category.

It was fairly good, could've made it a little bit longer though.

Absolutely delightful. I hadn't thought of Freya as much of a xenophobe, but you didn't overdo it at all; it's also obvious that her anxiousness and mild disgust has its origins in her own nervousness about her relationship with Amarant. Besides, it's nice to see a non-angelic Freya with neuroses just like everybody else; there are too many 'perfect' Freya representations running around here! Short, sharp and sweet. You managed to accomplish in a handful of words what people with fifty chapters often can't. I loved "Unsightly." "Obscene?" "Unfathomable." Do write more!

That WAS really short, but I really like it. ^_^ Thought I'd review since no one else has, yet. I saw the end coming, but it was still a nice read.