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princesaangelbebe
2008-07-24
ch 2,
abusePoor Usagi.. I mean Serenity.. er... yeah, but why is everyone so afraid of her? Soo then Usagi and the senshi nvr existed.. right? plz update soon.
Loreley
2008-06-18
ch 2, anon.
abuseCould start Serena x Harry with Draco as her friend, then Harry gets with Ginny and Serena is free for Draco to win her heart. I don't think Serena x Draco should happen too fast because she wouldn't like Draco that way until he changed a tadbit. I can see him having an unrequited crush on her but not her returning the feelings until he had some time to learn to let go of his egotistic behavior. Having his feelings unrequited for a while would help him gain some humility even if he resents Harry for having the girl he likes. Would go well with everything else he's going through in sixth year. Best Draco is an angsty vulnerably-human Draco.
Mamie who?
2008-06-18
ch 2, anon.
abuseUsagi/Harry. More interesting with hr being a slytherin. ;)
MoonBunny615
2008-06-17
ch 2,
abuseInteresting, except that her being able to walk and talk after being in a coma isn't realistic, unless she was given some potion that helped in that department. And why were they so insistent on her going to wizardry school? Is it because her parents were from such powerful bloodlines and they want to keep them going? Does she have any living relative? Also, my vote is for Serena/Oliver Wood, you hardly (if ever) see a story with that pairing. Hope you update soon!
Hotrodgirl
2008-06-17
ch 1,
abuseUsagi/Draco please. they are my favorite couple.
HTchime
2008-06-17
ch 2,
abuseWell the teaser was really good, I just thought that the events in the 2nd chapter were rushed. I mean, practically speaking, if you were comatose as a baby(well 15 years...), never mind being able to speak in a different language when you wake up, but also being able to move like you just slept the night before? Haha I guess that's magic for you. Though, I think it would have been better to have delved more into everyone's reaction or even just Usagi's feelings about the matter. It just seemed that she coped with the matter too fast, considering how Usagi reacted at the last season of Stars where almost everyone left her. This time, there isn't even any starlights to comfort her. Ah well, it is fanfiction:)
May
2008-06-17
ch 2, anon.
abuseshe can always try to transform.

as long as she still has the silver crystal with her or inside her body, she can.

she will know if her dreams are real or not then.

as for pairings i don't care as long as it's not too obvious i hate it when they tell you from the first go who she going to end up with.

i think maybe because she's pretty and with an aura of mystery since she mostly keeps to herself, a few guys and even girls would begin to get crushes on her at first, you know like admirers who admire her from afar not knowing much about her, because they're intimidated and she attracts people's attention. i think harry could be one of those people who was curious about her, even if they become just friends in the end and she gets together with draco or someone else. i just don't like ginny.
Jay FicLover
2008-06-17
ch 2,
abuseVery, so very intriguing. My... she's been in a come for fifteen years, and she's sixteen? That means, she was a one-year-old baby when she fell nto the coma? Or may be that she was sixteen, but the coma was part of a curse or something, that didn't allow her to grow older. That would explain in a more normal way how she can talk and everything(experts say, if a person hasn't learned to talk by age seven, they never quite will, due to the "use it or lose it" rule of the evolution of the brain).

This, in a more "normal" way, other than the dreams I guess. Because if she really was a one-year-old at the time she was left comatose, and all the explanation as to how she can talk like a normal person was her dreams... then that's just, scary (for the wizard community, I mean). It would mean they're more than just dreams...that she's either a telephat/psychic, or (to us readers) that her dreams are not just dreams at all. (Hears fans in the background yelling, "Hooray! That means she's still Sailor Moon!")

This is very interesting... please please please please please please please please, continue? ^_^
Serenity Usagi Malfoy
2006-01-28
ch 1,
abuse*gasp* DRACO/USAGI! @_@ i can't get enough good written fics about that couple...please update? ^^
Raining Blood Red Moon
2005-01-05
ch 1,
abusethat was really cool how you made it so that her entire life as sailor moon was fake and that she was a witch in reality. who are her parents going to be? is she going to be the child of really famous parents? i think that she should be paired with Draco because that's my favorite couple. are the scouts going to be in this without being scouts?
elvenrarehunter
2004-05-19
ch 1,
abuseIt's good, but my only suggestion would be that when you write your chapters, make sure the sentence sounds right. Try reading it aloud to yourself or over the phone to somebody. You'll catch a lot of stuff that way. I do it all the time. Anywho, as for my vote, I say either Usagi/Wood or Usagi/Harry. Either one. Keep up the good work and I'll be waiting for more.
ERH ^-^
GLowStick
2004-05-17
ch 1,
abuseUsagi/Draco.
hopeful artimas
2004-05-17
ch 1, anon.
abusei like harry/usagi but i woulnt object to wood/usagi
jeangirl
2004-05-17
ch 1,
abuseusagi/draco please!
xan_dra
2004-05-17
ch 1, anon.
abuseUSAGI/DRACO RULES. It can be also Usagi/Wood, but please don't do this Usagi/Harry. I don't like this couple.
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