'Hoy...keep writing~...I've wanted to see Vyse/Lawrence shouen-ai...

So...write more...Please...

It's a bad idea being up at 4:30-5:00 in the morning.

~cath

Yay Lawrence! I like it alot so far ^^ Keep it up!

^^ I can't wait for the Shonen-ai. It's good so far. Everyone's in character. It made me want to play the game really bad.

grerat fic update soon

^_^ Yays, can't wait for the next chapter!

Thank you again for your reviews! ^_^ And yes, I'm sure Vyse'll like his pressie. :p
It may be awhile before I can update again since I'm currently using the comp for coursework and other various, crappy projects. Plus I intend on making the chapters a helluva lot longer and more interesting.
So yeah, shounen-ai in the next chapter! And it could very well be another first coupling I've claimed. ^_~
Keep readin' and reviewin'!
-HellFighter

So the adventure begins, eh? With more opportunities for Vyse and Lawrence to enhance their...*ahem*... friendship...*cough*
Lawrence: ...Why is she looking at me like that...!?
Oh Lawrence darling, don't be silly... *takes shiny rope from bottom drawer of her... um... computer desk?* I'm just making a nice little present for Vyse... Now, c'mere! *cackles*
-*later*-... *We now see Lawrence, tied up in ribbons, being carried out of the room*
Lawrence: Put me down you little bi- *gagged*
Hm... wonder if Vyse'll like his gifty...
~Koko~

Aw, this chapter just seemed so short! But amusing, all the same... Shounen ai... but not between Vyse and Lawrence? ^^; Whom then? Lawrenece and Domingo? XD
Speaking of which, my favorite part was the adorable sneeze of Domingo. n.n Traditional japanese, someone talking bad about him, one sneeze. ^^ I bet he sneezed so cute. I wonder if Lawrence blessed him. He should have. It would have been nice. ::rambles on and on::
My least favorite part was the Fina/Vyse stuff. ^^; ::doesn't like Fina:: And the dream was confusing... But interesting. It makes me wonder.
^_^ And it was an amusing chapter. Please update soon!

*tackle-glomps you* yar, me like more Skies shounen-ai!! :D
Anyways, good to see a new pairing!! Vyse/Lawrence!! Yay it's cool. I LOVE LOVE LOVE this first chapter. You write Lawrence very well. The day and night thing was quite beautiful. And Lawrence's chocolate eyes... gah that was probably my favorite part.
Other than the fact that I would greatly appreciate it if you didn't put anymore thoughts like Osman stripping into my head, AWESOME start and please write more!

*thinks of Osman stripping* AH! My eyes! They're Burning! *runs in little circles*
*grins* Vyse/Lawrence, huh. Even I never would have thought of that... I like it ^^.
*holds out hands* More? Please? Need you to write more...
~Koko~

Hey, I really like this! We need more shounen-ai stories around here as the choices are...bleak, to say the least.
I love the whole description of night/day! ^_^ Keep this story going!!
-CCO
(Hey, you've claimed first Lawrence/Vyse, congrats!)