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| Reviews for The SunnyDale Immortal |
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   Bobboky 2/22/06 . chapter 8unconventional Xander married to unconventional Faith... Who knows what strange (and maybe "unconventional") things they might cause to happen... probably kinky too |
| SHAWN PROVONCHA 5/3/05 . chapter 8 THIS IS A GREAT STORY SO PLEASE UPDATE. |
| SHAWN PROVONCHA 1/20/05 . chapter 8 THIS STORY JUST KEEPS GETTING BETTER. |
| SHAWN PROVONCHA 1/20/05 . chapter 7 THIS IS A GREAT STORY SO PLEASE FINISH SOON. |
| SHAWN PROVONCHA 1/20/05 . chapter 6 LOVE THIS STORY. |
| SHAWN PROVONCHA 1/20/05 . chapter 5 GREAT CHAPTER. |
| SHAWN PROVONCHA 1/20/05 . chapter 4 NICE WORK ON THIS STORY. |
| SHAWN PROVONCHA 1/20/05 . chapter 3 GREAT WORK . |
| SHAWN PROVONCHA 1/20/05 . chapter 2 ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER. |
| SHAWN PROVONCHA 1/20/05 . chapter 1 REALY GREAT STORY. |
| SHAWN PROVONCHA 12/15/04 . chapter 8 THIS IS A REALY GREAT STORY TO READ I CANT WAIT TILL IT IS FINISHED. |
| dogbertcarroll 12/9/04 . chapter 8 Uber Xander can be fun but you've taken a lot of the fun out of it. Dru is always a fun character to add in for tension, but we need something more. |
| dogbertcarroll 12/9/04 . chapter 2 A bit cheesy. |
| dogbertcarroll 12/9/04 . chapter 1 You need to separate the dialog into sections so we know who is talking. As is it all tends to run together. Xander would hardly split without quite a bit of proof. You need some scenes involving Death explaining things in detail and showing proof of what's going on. All in all I have to admit I liked it. |
| TheDeadWalk 9/20/04 . chapter 8 Love the plot and the pairing. Trouble just seems to follow Xander everywhere. Dawn needs to mellow out though. Please continue. |
