Hey, seeing how its only the first chapter, I guess there's really not that much that I can say. However, so far, it seems pretty good. I hope you update soon though, Cuz it sounds like it will be a great story, once you get past the whole introduction part. I love your summary, I'm really excited to see where your story is gonna go... :-)

~Peace and Love~
Becky

Wow. Wow. And did I mention, wow.
Harry: Poor Hermy...
Draco: Feh, stupid girl.
*waps him* *huggles Giggle* It's great. I hope you keep it's greatness going. And, sorry I haven't been able to talk to you lately, but I no longer have AIM. Meant to e-mail you, but I've been busy with finals and everything.
Hermione: Bitterness and Despresion, WOOT!
Ron: *sniffles* You hate me...
Hermione and Neo: Duh.
Draco: Slow on the draw, ain't he?
Anywho, I'll e-mail you as soon as I can, my dear friend. *sniffle* I miss you so. WE ALL LOVE YOU!
Harry: *nods*
Hermione: She's right.
Draco: I hate you all.
Everyone: *glares*
Draco: ...I mean...Love and Peace! *imitating Vash*
Good enough...BAI! *farewell huggle*