why do u have sympathy for satan??

You rock my socks in a full metal box.

BLASPHEMER! How could you do this?!?! WHY SLASH THE BIBLE?!?!?!

Hahahahahahahaha. Jokes love.

Alright, here's the real review.

Keep up the good work and write another. This is nice. Oh by the way, I love your other story about Judas and Jesus. Write another. ;-)

Kisses,
Me

D: I swear if anybody flames this story *waves fist*

Pardon me, but did you just use SLASH to write a fic in the BIBLE section?

Very good. Interesting view of God...

I will say though, that I thought Lucifer's fall was generally accepted to have occurred, like, pre-Garden of Eden... Certainly before the birth of Christ.

Still, in this story, it works.

I'm gonna see if you have any other interesting fics later. ^-^

Entity and the Keeper

I love it ^_^ Nicely written. And don't worry about the flamers, they don't like it then they don't have to read it, they can just ignore it.

What's really wrong is that I actually like this. Meh, it's all those times anime took the sandbox of Christianity out to ** that desensitized me I guess. Ah My Goddess, and Wish from Clamp... This is good.

Hell, if we could sexualize Ares and co from the Greek and Roman "mythology" (we say myth, they say religion, we say religion, they say myth), why not the Christian bible?

WHAT THE F%*^?*grabs flamethrower and flames author,scorching her from head to toe*YOU'LL BE IN GREATER AGONY WHEN YOU'RE BURNING IN TOPHET!

well this was ...diffrent.. but the writting is really good, caught my attention and i just had to read.

Cute. XD If there really is a God out there, I hope he has a sense of humour or else you're in trouble >_>;

Dude, this so made my night. *collapses in a fit of giggles*

BLASPHEMER! OH, REPENT AND TURN FROM YOUR EVIL WAYS, YOU SINNER!! YOU HAVE DEFILED THE HOLY OF HOLIES, THE freakin' BIBLE!

wow...captivating, really...thats a good story...i applaud ur skill..wow..
lol thats all i can say.
great job, really. beautifully written. i absolutely love it.
thanks for writing such a entrancing story.
~starlite~

Aye, good story. Interesting, deep. Flamers are quite naive. Continue to write, regardless of what the mindless people say!