2. Not bad. Not bad. Grammar was a little weird, but otherwise I liked it.

3. Hmm. She needs to tremble more, but not TOO bad. It could be better, but it could be worse.

4. Hmm. Interesting. Decent chappy. Not too great, not too bad. Your writing is a teensy better then average.

5. This one is pretty good. I like it.

6. Kinda cute. I like the part about Legolas's singing.

Hey, some good angst for once! Brava, brava!

I LOVE the line about what is rain. If raindrops are tears from heaven, then is sunlight the smiles of angels?

I will review your other chapters as well.

Again, It's Shannon:

*gasp!* OHMIGAWSH! I'm offended! I am so totally gonna go, like, get my jock boyfriend to beat you up!

Lol, totally.
~Shanifico The Great~

This is Shannon again...I am not Petra, and no she does no have an evil other half.

Just wanted to say somethings. To my distinguished colleague, Petra: You're a totally awsome writer, rock on and I WANT MY FRICKEN GERARD DOLL!

To Kikiarawen: Haha, you're a **! Your insults are just to die for, they're so funny! Come up with some original insults and maybe a good reason why you hate this story and then come back and post another review. I dare you.

I WANT MY FRICKEN GERARD DOLL!

Of course I remember you! I think your story is very good - I may have to advertise it on my next chapter! I will be updating mine soon.

Anyways, I love this story and I'm pleased you remember mine.

Um...Bye! lol

I love the way you make it where she has to explain everything! I'm sorry, I just find that funny. please update, the story is great!

Oh yay! it has been updated! finally. another great chapter. heh Anise keeps having to explain all the slang words to Legolas heh. Update Soon!

Heh heh...It kind of makes no sense that you made me read the things that happen after this, BEFORE I read this chapter! And I'm like, "Wait! She escaped from prison?!" Very nice...yadda yadda yadd...a.
Heh heh, have you ever noticed that 'orc' rhymes with 'pork'?

Yay! *jumps for joy* you updated! yay! yay! yay! yay! yay! yay! *huggles friend to death* great chapter. heh elf-dude i love it! Update Soon!

I like rereading stories:) again and again and again. I also just had sugar *oi!* Your stories are SO good *have to emphasize that* ya know when Melannen said that Deja Vu was a prelude to Orcs and that the Melannen character ended up with Legolas, you must keep in mind that it was Melannen that said it. I dont really think that made much sense, but oh well. I really like the way you show the emotions, really good.

I like lots :)you are so good at writing!

Orcs takes place after the War of the Ring and before Legolas sails over the Sea *starts to cry hystaricaly*, just sometime in there. Deja Vu is basically the prelude to ORCS, beginning during the first years of the 3rd age and is probably going to end slightly after the defeat of Sauron.

Great writing! You must write more stories!

the reason i have cliffies is because i myself dont know what the outcome is going to be. also i absolutely HATE cliff hangers, so i make my revenge:) lol.

But you did make one mistake. Elrohir is MINE!!
I dont know why, but I think Elrohir is better looking than Elladan, very odd.

Awesome job on this chapter! I luved it! ^^

Hi petra!

Its Alex!

Ur story ROCKS! I luv it!
Omg i wish i could rite like u! great job! u rok!! Can i stop praising u now? lol. jk. but seriously ur story is really good! i cant wait till u rite more!

Bi!

T'was a very interesting chapter. I'm glad you finally updated. For some reason I feel like I'm in the water. Did you have to use my name? xD; Well, it's cool. The story is moving along nicely. ^-^