great story
by the way "revenge is a dish best served cold" is what khan said to kirk in star trek 2

awws...so sad.(the kia part) so cute (the naru/sasu/saku/hina part)
and so-so(the rest)

I love the part “Your late Naruto” Kakashi stated Naruto smiled his fox-like grin before saying “Sorry Kakashi I got lost on the road of life”... that is so funny! Once again I love these stories!

you are a really good writer i have already read no guts no glory and you do the meanwhile thing a little to mush look in a dictonary for another word More More More!

Best story I ever read, particularly the fight scenes

pretty good

cool

I can't wait until vol. 3. This is the best series I've read so far and that's really saying something. I'm glad Jin didn't die. I know you didn't care, but I wish I had a chance to vote just to make sure. Also it's about freaking time someone other than myself thought of air walking. I mean come on it's simple yet cool. Well even if you don't get a whole lot of responses, just know that I'll still be reading and responding.

o.0 Lee's air stairway technique is awesome...I wish I could do that...

I was kinda surprised that Hiashi is being...like,as calm as you could expect from a person when their daughter is about to get married.I mean,Naruto is in Wave Country and it's his wedding day...If I were Hiashi,I'd be outside with a ginat steel hammer or mace waiting for Naruto to show up so I could whack him on the head!

Well, not too into Naruto's wedding... I believe you did a good thing leting it out of the story... plus a really god ending to this chapter... at least in my opinion.
Can't wait to read the chuunin exam part... it's my favorite from the original story.

Yeah, I'm still reading, but... FLYING?! 'Naruto' isn't 'Dragonball'! Sorry, but this is too disturbing for me to let go.
Above that, the chapter is nice... plus we get to see Neji...

Naruto's cold hearted! He rejected three kids!
Btw, did you get that part with Inari and Zabuza's katana from King Arthur?
I liked Anna and Jin's 'reunion'... pretty funny.

Bu! Kiba's dead! Why?!
Plus, his fight with Naruto gives me an impression Naruto's undefeated (shouldn't the loud mouth and dog breath be at similar level?).
I wonder what will happen to the missing-nins.

Well, Kiba's reasons seem rather minor for someone who's so determinate... or maybe I'm over reacting?
Anyway, two things I'd like to announce (forgot them every time I write a review in your story):
#1: Naruto's last name is Uzumaki
#2: Sasuke's old brother's name is ITACHI, not Itatchi

Also, I like the fact that you didn't made Kiba just a black character. That's what I liked in the Wave Country mission in the manga: that Zabuza and Haku were more then just bad guys, there was more to them that it was visiable at first.

The fighting scene is pretty good (though no Naruto in this chappie...). And I like the fact that Kiba is visiably stronger then Jin (I guess Kiba is at the jounin level, right?).
Only one thing, being a 'Naruto'-fan, I just can't let go: how come a missing-nin know's a technique used ONLY by the Uchiha?!
I still like the story very much though.