oh my god i have been ROTFLMAO all day scince i started reading this its good update soon plz.

jesika

o cy lol awesome this nate guy is fuunii but i do wonder why he isnt in the 8th demension of hell yet... alone with A LOT of star's pudding, lanfills tofu, bright-taffic colrs, and infernal beeping! 0.0!!

I’m actually not surprised that Raven’s not his first girlfriend. Desperate, but not picky he is. Keep up the good work, dark

O Ravens gunna be mad... i'm so happy youu updated its made my day :D:D cant wait for your next chapter :D:D it will be eagerly awaited :D:DXD

I realy liked it so far so can you please cointinue.

I hope you will reconsider, I would like to see this story completed. But whatever you decide, thanks...Gerry

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I feel sorry for raven. I think she’s going to discover pastel formal dresses the hard way. Sigh, and her hair possibly turned lavender also. (Grin, wouldn’t that just be the best way to torture the poor girl?) And one better, a corset! She’s going to get people from all around wanting to meet her, right? Keep up the good work, dark

OMG I cant wait until you update you are a talented writer i must say but i realy want you to update soon pleae :D:D

Great story :D:D

I could see the lady of Beasts and Beastboy hitting it off quite well... keep up the good work, dark

This was a hilarious chapter, but I really need you to do a massive favour, can you, uh kinda give me a brief summary of what has happened in the story, coz I don't seem to rememba... but anyway, this chapter was awesome, I'm still laughing, the ending 'wishes' from titans and the family, jeez I feel sorry for Raven =D
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AH YEAH! o me gee i love it more and more!! PART TWO PART TWO PART TWO yeah wo hoo ::dances and jumps around:: I shouldn't be on right now hahaha it's 2 in the morning and i have a spanish final tomorrow bleh but...WHO CARES!! i'm too hyped on sugar and this story makes me hyper!! i love it i love it i love it! WOOT UPDATE!

where did aqualad end up? and with the fire/wind powers, wouldn't 'the lost desert' turn into 'the glassy desert'? keep up the good work, dark

Brilliant, absoulutly brillian!! I loved it i loved it i loved it!! and the ending made me laugh xD you're good!