Well, I've finished reading all three stories. And while they are not the best written stories I've ever read, they were still damn entertaining. I loved the story lines for each book, I like how you flashed back to previous events. Didn't much like the songs in the middle of the chapters, but I do know what you were going for (I've wanted to do that myself, but I never quite found an ideal way to add a soundtrack to a chapter before FFnet put the kibosh on songs in fics).

As for the bad:
Ginny: her complicity in the attack on Xavier's school is never adequatley fleshed out. Sure, drunken Hermione calls her out on it, but then it's kind of pushed under the rug and forgotten.

Sinistra- not a bad thing (I really enjoyed the character), but it would have been better to have several attack by Sinistra coupled with HErmione being convienently absent, if only to build up the misdirection.

Mr. Weasley: considering Harry looks up to Mr. Weasley like a father, you really dropped the ball on having Harry confront Mr. Weasly (or any of the other Weasley's) about his ties to Weapon X and the Sentinels. There really should have been something here.

Ninteen Years Later: More detail on the epiloge! Did Harry and Hermione marry? Are Ron and Cynthia together-together? What's Ron's new persona as a solo crime fighter? Details, mang. Details!

Mage- What the hell were his powers? TK/Telepathy, power absorbtion, able to leap tall buildings ina single bound... you really should have defined his powers in the early chapters.

Overall though this was a very enjoyable story. I like trying to pick out where certain thigns were comming from (Movies, comics, Ultimate Comics- Spidey!). Of coruse, now I'm inspired to write my own HP/X-MEn crossover thanks to you. I promise not to blatantly rip you off.

Cheers!

-Naitch
The Nature Boy
Stylin' and Profilin' sicne

WOW what a great story! Sequal PLEASE.


-(-)- Mark -(-)-

Wow, now there's a rollercoaster. So, I suppose this is the actual end? I just feel like there should be more than just a simple letter from Hermione to Albus. So Harry and Hermione have a child or not. Because if I'm not mistaken, the Phoenix healed the permanent damage Hermoine took to her stomach.

awesome. that was amazing

Oh my word. That was one of the best series I have read in a LONG, LONG time. Thank you ever so much. Loves to you.

its been a long time since i have reviewed anything. this story has been the most interesting ive ever read, its never left me wanting more(until now because its over).the plot you came up with has in my opinion made this the best piece fanfiction ever written and posted anywhere. again i must say the only dissapointing thing is that it had to end. thank you for the hours of entertainment.

sincerly,
BLKLAB
(self proclaimed fanfiction critic)

wow this is a rilly great story i loved it. i hope you write another one like this with harry potter and the x men or maby naruto and the x men i have not read one o those.

I can honestly say that that was the best story I have ever read on . I have been reading on this site since I was twelve, and I am now twenty.
This story had me laughing, crying, angry, and on the edge of my seat. You are a talented writer with an amazing imagination.
To sum it up: Awesome job.

I can't believe it... I've read the first two fic and now I can't even bring myself to read the last chapter.

I thought that the first two stories were great, and so was the first half of this one, but the ending is easily one of the worst I've ever attempted to read. Plus, the song lyrics did little to get the feel of the chapter across, in fact they were pretty annoying.

I'm all for a cheesy feel good ending... but Ron an Avenger? Hermione suddenly being told that she would be the next headmistress? There is only so much a person can take before it completely ruins a story.

I love this series you are a wonderful writer keep up the good work ps. think a bout an harry stargate atlantis crossover or a harry star trek xover.

Coolo Trio
Though, you should probably note the story as Complete, ne?

Dude, it is now 2:00 am and I have to be a work tomorrow morning. I read the whole thing! Strong work here, you are truly talented though I real;y am gonna hate you when I have to get up in the morning. Yes I read all three tonight!

OH MY ** GOD! That was, without a ** doubt, the ABSOLUTE best the story I have EVER read. You are a God among authors and deserve the utmost respect.

For the sake of not typing more than I absolutely have to, I would like to say that this trilogy is BLOODY BRILLIANT! These stories are AWESOME! That's all I can say, other than a single question. Is there gonna be any more to this story? I know Voldy-Moldy is gone, but Magneto's still alive. Really though, is there gonna be more?!?!

That was great once again. I luv it!

-mel :)