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Nice story. Except the yuri parts, but I ignore those and focus on the storyline.

Boy, do you need to get circumcised?

awesome fic dude! hope u finish it...it's been a while since i last wen to this site... astig talaga! tapusin mo sana!

I really loved this story at first~! It began great (up to chapter 11). Now I don't know what's going on...to many chracters and to hard to follow... :(

An assassin is never a match for a vit knight of the same lvl and equipment when it comes to all out battle. (Skills allowed) A no skill battle is the invention of assassins who can't accept that truth. What about wizards then? Will you ask them for a no skill battle too? Pm me in Odin as Eliarainne and let's have a match with your assassin vs. my knight I'm not mad or anything but I hate it when people say assassins outclass knights.

Anyway, a great chapter and a fast update. Two things I always enjoy, especially with your writing. Keep going!

Ay nako, drama nanaman...tol naman kaunting tiyaga lang yan. Kailangan mo lang maging matatag sa pagsusulat para mapansin ka ng mga tao. Pakatandaan mo na dapat nagrereview ka rin ng ibang mga gawa para magkaroon ka ng "presence" dito sa section natin. Kung hindi lumilitaw ang pangalan mo sa pahina ng mga review ng ibang awtor e talagang walang makakakita sa iyo.

Anyway, the prophecy was well-crafted. Again I admire the dark setting around this fic. Keep writing!

Don't worry mate, we're reading your story. And an excellent one it is. Good job :)

Never give up or feel abandoned! Flames can be very insulting. As always, Zero Stalker returns.

Two chapters in just a small period of time? That's incredible speed. I didn't reveiw the last chapter coz I...well...forgot.

From the very start of this fic, all your fight scenes are really bloody and that includes the Fateless One's ability to rebuild themselves. That's great! Keep the blood flowing and maye next time, I'll bring a ungry vampire along (joke).

I'm trying to look for your character in pRO. Mine is named zerostalker. He's a crusader with black hair and sunglasses. I wish I could use the GM character...but my uncle won't allow it.

thats new.
i thought you were dead. three months with 2 updates? you gatta be dead to write in this speed.
one thing, try to make the story understandable and slower. i feel as if someone warped me into a high roler coaster
nice fic any way, glad you fibally posted

I liked the gore, its well described. Again I have to say its really hard to follow this story. The characters and their names are starting to get too complicated.

Keep writing!

Blood and gore...excellent ground beef in an instant...cool...you've brought everyone together now? You've got amazing fight scenes and vivid descriptions of how they attack, what was hit, blood...everything. This story is on my list.

Jarade's way of using venoms could be devastating. Excellent job with the terms and fightings. You made them clearly and precisely unlike a certain young writer I've heard of. If you are from Odin server then I might try finding you. I'm a GM so it wouldn't be difficult.

I'm really having a hard time following this fic. You have too many characters and the characters each have their side stories and the side stories have their own characters that also have backgrounds...it's branching out too fast. Perhaps it would be really useful if you had an "Introduction" chapter for this fic. All it needs is a little background on your Rune-Midgard, the important characters and what's going on. Keep writing! Oh and I'm in the Odin server too Silsendra(Knight) or Altimeia (Crusader)

Guys! i apologize for a certain mistake... it would seem that when i uploaded chap 23 and 24, i forgot to upload chap 22 as well, anyway i hope you enjoy this half of the fic. the other half is coming in shortly after i get rid of a certain disease called "writer's block"