i think that this is a really good start to a fic and i really really hope you continue it! i want to see what happens to ryo and dee!!

But, But, But... what happens? I need to know! Its gonna drive me crazy, finish the damn story!! Please!

aawe man i was into this o well im fairly impressed and cant wait to read more

good fic.

I hope you're still updating this story, it is quite good and I really would lik eot see more come of it.

erg...cliffe of doom! good story!

WHAT?! You can't stop there!! NO! AH! I'm writhing in suspence!

ack!! i need more i tell you. more!

AH! THIS MUST BE CONTINUED! YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE!

Ok! Ok! Good story and all but dude Leo aint like that, Leo's a cool guy man! And he's certainly not gay!! Haven't you read any of the manga's? But other than that, congrats!^^

very very good!!can't wait till next chapie!!

This is a good take on the FAKE series and I can't wait to see what you do with the story, and I like the whole Leo kissing Ryo idea. I myself just finished the 7th FAKE book and this story is really good. I hope that you update soon.

keep going! I have to know wghat happens!

Good chapter, even though the grammar mistakes were drving me crazy.
Hurry up with the next chapter! Hurry up hurry up hurry up! I'm impatient and I had caffeine, so hurry up hurry up hurry up!
*Breathes deep* I gotta learn some self control, I really must...

*Sniffles and smiles* Alrighty, you make Dee kick Leo's ** and I will forever be in your debt! ^_^ *Nibbles on Pocky* Yummy... food... *Cuddles with Ryo plushi* Its ok Ryo, Dee will make it all better, i promise. ^-^