I couldn't help but feel sorry for Gabriel since, well; in the movie it did look like he was in control when he attacked Dracula, and this story seemed like a theory to me of why he ended up killing Anna.

Anyway; keep up the good work.

A couple of things... first off, Van Helsing is the LEFT hand of God, not the right hand. Also, you need to make it more obvious where the story ends and your Author's Note begins... right now, the two are just smooshed together at the end, and it looks very confusing. In the future, when you get to the end of the actual story portion, make a line of stars (like this *) or another sort of dividing line and then clearly mark your Author's Note.

I think you did a great job with it.

It's a really good story and i think that you should continue it
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Love it. Your fanfic is really nice, and gives Van Helsing an actual mind, rather than just following what god tells him to.

wow..you are good!

i really enjoyed that. it was really good. i think it would be good if you wrote a follow up fiction when Van Helsing accidentally meets the reincarnated Anna. Maybe his son with another woman falls in love with her or something really weird like that, it would be so cool.
just one thing, i think you should change your plot summary on the front page, because some people may not know or want to knwo that Anna dies. You could change it to something along the lines of. "Van Helsing seeks solace from Cardinal Jinette to find answers to questions left unanswered at the end of the film." And then in CAPITALS you need a warning CONTIANS SPOILERS. This is only a minor criticism and is not at all a slur on your actual story and writing skills, which are fabulous.

Good job! I think you should write more Van Helsing but have Anna live or something!! :)
Sorry, but i just hated the movie ending so much!!

That was really good! I liked it! It had depth!

Please don't put such a huge spoiler in the plot summary. I wasn't expecting to see it while browing the "Just In" page.