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vaoni
2007-04-17 . chapter 10
Continue please! I am really enjoying this!! Just love it!!
gerigirl
2007-04-01 . chapter 10
i beleive that sanzo is on his way to save the day as in mighty mouse i do hope that you update asap it has been a while since i've first read this story but it still gets better everytime i read hopefully you don't keep us readers in suspence for to long anyway i hope that you don't have readers blockage i really want to see what happens in the next chapters thank you for giving me something to look forward to in the near furture
Bluefangluver
2006-11-07 . chapter 10
What happens next? Does Sonzo Love Goku? What about that sick warden?Does he finis the journel...DOES HE EVEN GET OUT! WHAT HAPPENS NEXT
Omni L Sama
2006-09-10 . chapter 10
this story rocks :D
Omni L Sama
2006-09-09 . chapter 1
Nice :D
SanzoxGoku addict
2006-03-26 . chapter 10
And then? Sanzo gets through the Labrinth, beats the crap out of Shuro with Goku's help, and they all get out of the prison, living happily ever after? Yes? Or something like that. Well, then hurry up and update! I love teh AUs!
GoldenEyes
2005-10-16 . chapter 10
Hello!

Whah! This chapter came out so fast! I'm sorry I couldn't reveiw the day it came out (I like to do that ^_^). On your comment about the quotes; I do enjoy them alot. I even write alot of them down in my quotebook. Irony is always entertaining. As for the prodictions...well I can't be sure. I can make logical guesses: either Konzen (allthough that's not too logical considering he's already reicarnated) or Nataku. but if it's Nataku I don't really know who the "love" would be unless it was Goku. But you've allready established that Konzen and Goku were lovers to I'm pretty stumped. You're deffinatly not prodictable; you are good at envoking thought though. It makes the story more intresting to read because you think about the differant possibilities or outcomes and weigh them out against eachother trying to solve the mystery. Oh I just got another idea; it could be the inner thoughts of the Seiten Taisei (I don't know if I spelled that right), or Goku's other form. It is technically 'sealed' and would find Sanzo's presence familior because of his connection with Konzen...but I honestly have no idea...heehee, well you've sey up your adoring fans with quite a cliff hanger. Meany! (I'm kidding; I love the suspence!) I can't wait to see how everything falls together! It seems like everything is somehow connected but it's just impossible to figure it out before you want us to. I love it! I hope to read more soon. I'm so excited! Your story is amazingly awsome and well written with a grasping plot! You are an amazing writter; Kudos!
Your adoring fan,

GoldenEyes
kitsubugchan
2005-10-14 . chapter 10
yay! This chapter really did come fast. I want the next one now *holds out hands* please..lol
Kohaku-Yuuga's-rembrance
2005-10-11 . chapter 10
I think in the end you were talking about Konzen...because that's the only person who i can think of, besides Goku...but i don't think that's it's Goku you are refering to it's most likely konzen. anywayz update soon! i absolutely loved this chapter and what did Homura find so funny that got me really puzzled.
Miss Goku
2005-10-09 . chapter 10
^_^ thos fan fic is great
KillerSocks39
2005-10-08 . chapter 10
KYAA! It was so Konzen! XD

Aww... Konzen is such a romantic bastard~
ShotsuMei
2005-10-08 . chapter 10
Wonderful as always. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for chapter eleven.
Meemei
2005-10-08 . chapter 10
Wow, after not updating in like forever you now update about once a month. thanks. I like this story and would have bben tatolly bummed if you didn't continue it.(I thought you weren't)
Raining Firefly
2005-10-05 . chapter 9
Hi!

Yes! I'm so happy you've updated (shame on those people who were mean!)!! I swear I almost screamed of joy when I saw a new chapter; I've been checking every few days for a long time ^^;; I love the way it's turning out! you're really good with cliffhangers; I don't know if you even mean to. It seems every time I read a chapter I can not wait to find out what happens; you make it seem like everything is leading up to some huge event (whahh I'm so excited!) I don't blame you for not liking to write fight scenes (I don't either); but for the record; the ones you've already written were really good. ^_^ Woohoo I can't wait to see what happens to everyone! Proticurally Sanzo and Goku; I'm excited to see how their realationship turns out. I don't mean romanticly improticular; I mean in general (allthough I do like them together alot ^^). The way they naturally depended on eachother was awsome. I'm proticurally excited to see your story of "what happened" with Konzen and Goku etc. I can only imagion! I hope to read more soon! This story is wonderful!

Raining Firefly
Miss Goku
2005-10-04 . chapter 9
I'm loving this story. I know how hard it is to up date i barrly have time to write my fic. I am doing homework most of my time, so don't feel bad or anything if you up date slow. It happens to the best of up ^_^
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