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Destiny45
2007-03-10
ch 18,
abuseA really sweet ending!

You wrote this story and it's characters so well. I really felt the love between Achilles and Briseis. Great story, I hope you do another "Troy" one.
caithzadz
2007-02-17
ch 18,
abusecute story... since I loved it so much, it's going to my favs! great job!
siddika
2006-12-03
ch 18,
abuseLovely story
Sekowari
2006-06-25
ch 4,
abuseWell on second thought, what I said earlier about age and all might not apply to you. Eh, it does for me, though. I definitely do not have a nack for writing superb fanfics. My mind can't seem to function that way. My stories always turn out to be stilted, awkward, and no one reviews. You could read my stories, I guess, but they aren't ones that you'll really treasure. anyways, still loving your fanfic! ^__^
Sekowari
2006-06-25
ch 2,
abuseEver since I became a member of I have never given out a flame or any sort of criticism. Personally, I've gotten flames before, and I know how bad it can make me feel. I suppose readers don't know how old the writers are (at least, they don't know my age ^__^), and some people are younger, so they don't have as much writing experience as, say, some person studying in university. Enough of this. I would proudly like to say that I really like your fanfic! Keep up the good work!
Mrs Christensen
2006-02-02
ch 18,
abuseThis was such a sweet story and it was really enjoyable! I thought the idea of all those tasks were great and it was so sad when she was getting angry at the real Achilles in the task of trust!
China Doll
2005-11-13
ch 8, anon.
abuseHm, normally I try not to comment until the end of the story, but I just had to bring this up. Persephone is not only Apollo's Aunt, she was first and formost his sister. Persephone is the daughter of Demeter and Zeus, so she is more likely to call Apollo brother than nephew, also, Apollo would be the older sibling.
Brutal Moonshine
2005-07-19
ch 18,
abuseawh cute i luved it

~Al
Takada Saiko
2005-06-23
ch 18,
abuseAhh! I loved it! What a great story! ^.^
Vanished-2
2005-03-06
ch 3,
abusewow! Good going with this story. the summary is just amazing. i dont usually read a story becuase of it's summary but i couldnt resist yours. it was realyl good. and the story wasnt dissapointing at all. its really great so far! welldone. i rarely find a really good summary AND story. but now i have.!
great going. this is amazing stuff.
p.s if you have time please read my story and see if it compares to yours. it is "the manner of love" and it is in R rated for "troy". pls review if you have time. thanks loads.
and once again WELLDONE.
Myrmidon Priestess
2005-02-06
ch 18,
abuseWow. Will there be a sequel? I really want to read more.
Deanne
2005-02-05
ch 18, anon.
abuseWhoot! But where do they live now? I love your story. ACHILLES + BRISEIS!!
KD Skywalker
2005-01-13
ch 18,
abuseThis was such an awesome story!
Deebah
2004-10-16
ch 18, anon.
abuseLove it Love it Just love it
Anonymous
2004-10-11
ch 18, anon.
abuseAw! I'm filled with all sorts of warm fuzzy feelings.
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