The title was rather encapturing, I guess because I have posted a story called [perfect sky torn]. Anyway, this was well written. Poigant yet bittersweet, I enjoyed it immensely. Keep writing.

this is one of the first Kirin/Rasen fic i have ever seen

and it's really touching!

they're my fav couple and i hope you'll be doing some more soon!

i really look forward to it

maa... i reread this again... and found the ending very meaningful *sniffsniff* btw, does kirin MIND dying for rasen? it's like, rasen will get plonked in the erm... 'perfect sky' if he suddenly finds out kirin does NOT want to die yet... okay, that was a bad joke. but i like the SONG more and more *YO!*

oh man... this is reallie great... no... u r reallie great! u've got me there, i never looked at them this way... i'm gonna go read volume 21 & 22 now, i'm sure i'll haf a new point of view! & thank u for the giving me tat new point of view! please write more stories/lyrics okie, i'll be waiting to read them!

The lyrics u wrote were really nice _ amazing visuals!