the ending is sweet. this story is short but sweet, and i like how in the ending, u really make it seem like this is really a legend, to by the Elves. i like, "I wish no dominion over the Sea. I do not want to master the power of the waves. I only want to admire its beauty and sing with the wind"

This is a nicely done fic^^ I liked it :)
-Starlight