*sniff sniff* Jeez, you should rate that R for sadness! *sniffle sniffle* anybody got a kleenex?

Arto! C'onya, kel imshir upsam dolin baliqua. Inyasion poem, kenso irrohen. Namarie niai Legolas, unsa? Jacord, leblin so natrin on kar. Muunaton!! Ebso ebso muunaton!! ^_^ Ta! Duuro

this poem has a very nice touch. :) i especially like the line 'will you sing for me one last time'. for some reason, it just seems to fit so well. the imagery is quite well done too. it conveys the desire to see him stay and yet to release him to be where he will be happier very well. nice job.
however, you may want to switch off the 'do not accept anonymous reviews' option because you might be preventing yourself from receiving many constructive reviews in the process. ;) cheers and good luck.

aww... i adore this, especially the second stanza... but i love the last 2 also. but the "Or should I keep your fair voice treasured in my memory" sort of hit it home. and "For you hodl the last memory of greatest deeds" shows that the rest of the fellowship is gone, and that htey will never return... very very VERY good.

Wow.. hat was really pretty... im totally speechless