I truley did enjoy this chapter, and I hpe that you write more. You have much promise as a writer but you should try to put more details in it.

Sorry if I sounded mean, please yell at me if I did. If you want you can check out my story "The Dreamer" on pg 1. If you would please review and tell me what you think. You should also check out SilverSunflower's story "Shadows in the Dark." Also on pg 1!^_^

I ope you update soon, I can't wait to see where this goes!

TA!
*Vvardenfell*